PermalinkSubmitted by rustyboy (not verified) on Sun, 03/22/2015 - 11:27pm
hi. for a poet, your spoken "writing" needs a re-write. your review is muddled with redundancies of language and generalities of thought. listen to your review and count the repetitions. i give your review 1 out of 5 stars for clarity and content. a review is a critical assessment of another's work. yours is not. i checked out your web site, and i do like your helvetica.
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hi. for a poet, your spoken "writing" needs a re-write. your review is muddled with redundancies of language and generalities of thought. listen to your review and count the repetitions. i give your review 1 out of 5 stars for clarity and content. a review is a critical assessment of another's work. yours is not. i checked out your web site, and i do like your helvetica.